Advice of a May evening

This is really advice to myself, although if any reader wants to take it as advice for him/herself, then feel free. Once a poem is released into the public ‘arena’, then it belongs to any and every reader to draw from it what they will. I have written a few poems in the past that were pieces of advice to myself, the result of a ceaselessly reflective and self-critical mind.

The photos were taken in the field behind the cottage I live in. How lucky I am, and yet it is also the result of personal choices made over years.

Advice of a May evening


Walk out into the broad, open field

of a May evening, look up

and consciously see how

the sunset cirrus clouds echo

themselves and rhyme

their indefinable threads of grace

in the azure void;

stand under the shower of birdsong,

seek no word,

pursue no thought,

lay down your burden,

and inhale a deep breath

of nothing



and be whole

a while.



©  David Urwin 2017


About jadedmountain

I am a poet, living a rural life in south-west Wales. The purpose of this blog is to publicise my poetry.
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